| Re: The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Feb-03/12:52 PM |
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Chirpe, indeede. Trying to be meaningful and deep, but comes out like a puddle of hedgehog piss. Fail.
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| Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Feb-03/12:50 PM |
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When (1) + man(1) + uses(2) + a(1) + flame(1)= 6. (a)You can't count, assmachine. (b)Dumb statement worthy only of "proverbs for dummies" books. (c)Poorly written, overall. Therefore, a zero.
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| Re: a comment on Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin |
13-Feb-03/12:45 PM |
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that would be chas-ed, twatface. In what dimension does "chased" have two syllables? "Chaste", a homonym of "chased" has one syllable as well. How many fingers are you really? 12, I just think you can't count 'em right. Hugs 'n' kisses, bumblefuck.
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| Re: Boddhistava by Enki |
13-Feb-03/10:40 AM |
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This thing made me think of the song "Obey the Cow God" by green jelly. but the poeme rocked less.
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| Re: Lindsey's Ballad by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
11-Feb-03/9:54 AM |
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There's a lot of cliche in the language ("caged bird")bit, but if you polished it a little, it could be good.
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| Re: a comment on Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
11-Feb-03/9:48 AM |
It seemed time. Glad the otaku thing went over well. I've been into anime a lot lately, so you can see the inspiration.
thankee.
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| Re: a comment on Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
11-Feb-03/9:46 AM |
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I know it does. That's one of the reasons it's so popular among men. though a cockring or viagra are also viable options.
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| Re: Truth by strider1 |
10-Feb-03/1:18 PM |
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The truth is: "I am suffering from menstrual cramps." there you go. Don't worry about humanity. it's teetering on the edge anyway. (I plan on giving it a push next week, shh..)
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| Re: nightly by <~> |
10-Feb-03/1:13 PM |
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yep, that was how I spent last night.
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| Re: Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
10-Feb-03/12:56 PM |
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you are such a CUUUUUTE little thing. I wrote more perversions for you.
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| Re: Pain by Teen14 |
10-Feb-03/9:55 AM |
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Yes, there needs to be more. Content, specifically. hope your chick doesn't die.
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| Re: Magick Fingers of Love by Wulf |
10-Feb-03/9:49 AM |
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Well that was an experience. a wise-ish man once said "those who spell magic with a 'k' aren't." I agree.
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| Re: Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
10-Feb-03/6:52 AM |
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Wow, I'm in a poeme! I'm flattered!
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| Re: a comment on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Feb-03/11:01 AM |
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I was thinking the Dark Elves as well, being the D&D geek I am.
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| Re: a comment on Feeling by chicka_babe05 |
5-Feb-03/6:35 AM |
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Hey, I just call 'em as I see 'em. I'd take that statement as something if I knew who Simon is... thanks, I think.
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| Re: What the runes said by INTRANSIT |
4-Feb-03/11:03 AM |
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That's an odd coincidence, ==doylum. I was just watching Bill & Ted's excellent adventure. I like the freud jokes best.
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| Re: The Grapes of Wrath by ==Doylum |
4-Feb-03/11:00 AM |
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| Re: An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Feb-03/10:56 AM |
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| Re: Feeling by chicka_babe05 |
4-Feb-03/10:34 AM |
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"state of selfhood"? What the hell is that supposed to mean? Seriously, though, your eloquent and moving use of "you" to rhyme with "you" shall surely put you solidly into our grand poetic tradition. You may even dethrone shakespeare! One thing, though: wouldn't the touch of someone's eyes be all squishy and gooey? Not to mention painful for the other person. Lastly, leave God out of this poeme. I asked the big guy, YH-to-the-VH about you and he said, "Never heard of her." Then he fell back asleep. However, the archangel Jibreel did say that you deserve a zero for this lump of solidified porcupine smegma. Who am I to defy divine will
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| Re: Kaolin Fire is SHIT by poemwanker |
3-Feb-03/9:04 AM |
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