| Re: The Boys and Girls Club of London by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Feb-03/12:59 PM |
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this had potential until the use of 'bod' to rhyme with "god". I had to take a break to finish giggling.
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| Re: Curse by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Feb-03/12:56 PM |
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Childish rhyme scheme, boring mssage. Did you keep repeating "poet" so much to convince yourself that you actually are one? Man, I'm glad I don't have to worry about a poet's cusre. Oh, The Pain (tm) of onefingeruphiass's Deep Inexpressible Feelings(tm)!
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| Re: Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Feb-03/12:53 PM |
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| Re: The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Feb-03/12:52 PM |
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Chirpe, indeede. Trying to be meaningful and deep, but comes out like a puddle of hedgehog piss. Fail.
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| Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Feb-03/12:50 PM |
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When (1) + man(1) + uses(2) + a(1) + flame(1)= 6. (a)You can't count, assmachine. (b)Dumb statement worthy only of "proverbs for dummies" books. (c)Poorly written, overall. Therefore, a zero.
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| Re: a comment on Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin |
13-Feb-03/12:45 PM |
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that would be chas-ed, twatface. In what dimension does "chased" have two syllables? "Chaste", a homonym of "chased" has one syllable as well. How many fingers are you really? 12, I just think you can't count 'em right. Hugs 'n' kisses, bumblefuck.
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| Re: Boddhistava by Enki |
13-Feb-03/10:40 AM |
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This thing made me think of the song "Obey the Cow God" by green jelly. but the poeme rocked less.
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| Re: Lindsey's Ballad by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
11-Feb-03/9:54 AM |
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There's a lot of cliche in the language ("caged bird")bit, but if you polished it a little, it could be good.
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| Re: a comment on Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
11-Feb-03/9:48 AM |
It seemed time. Glad the otaku thing went over well. I've been into anime a lot lately, so you can see the inspiration.
thankee.
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| Re: a comment on Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
11-Feb-03/9:46 AM |
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I know it does. That's one of the reasons it's so popular among men. though a cockring or viagra are also viable options.
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| Re: Truth by strider1 |
10-Feb-03/1:18 PM |
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The truth is: "I am suffering from menstrual cramps." there you go. Don't worry about humanity. it's teetering on the edge anyway. (I plan on giving it a push next week, shh..)
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| Re: nightly by <~> |
10-Feb-03/1:13 PM |
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yep, that was how I spent last night.
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| Re: Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
10-Feb-03/12:56 PM |
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you are such a CUUUUUTE little thing. I wrote more perversions for you.
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| Re: Pain by Teen14 |
10-Feb-03/9:55 AM |
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Yes, there needs to be more. Content, specifically. hope your chick doesn't die.
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| Re: Magick Fingers of Love by Wulf |
10-Feb-03/9:49 AM |
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Well that was an experience. a wise-ish man once said "those who spell magic with a 'k' aren't." I agree.
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| Re: Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
10-Feb-03/6:52 AM |
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Wow, I'm in a poeme! I'm flattered!
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| Re: a comment on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Feb-03/11:01 AM |
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I was thinking the Dark Elves as well, being the D&D geek I am.
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| Re: a comment on Feeling by chicka_babe05 |
5-Feb-03/6:35 AM |
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Hey, I just call 'em as I see 'em. I'd take that statement as something if I knew who Simon is... thanks, I think.
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| Re: What the runes said by INTRANSIT |
4-Feb-03/11:03 AM |
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That's an odd coincidence, ==doylum. I was just watching Bill & Ted's excellent adventure. I like the freud jokes best.
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| Re: The Grapes of Wrath by ==Doylum |
4-Feb-03/11:00 AM |
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