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Boddhistava (Other) by Enki
Catholic. Buddhist. Hindu. Cow. Bovine sweat upon my brow. Thoughts of meat fill up my mind, the cravings in me most unkind. The sight of flesh inspires me and makes my body fill with glee. All these things inside my head, they keep my soul with sickness fed. Catholic. Buddhist. Hindu. Plough.
Up the ladder: All I Feel
Down the ladder: lilah
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8400
Posted: February 12, 2003 8:08 AM PST; Last modified: February 12, 2003 8:08 AM PST
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[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.64.166.14 | 12-Feb-03/8:21 AM | Reply
I thought you were handsome pete returned.
Your not
[n/a] Enki @ 202.94.86.32 > ==Doylum | 23-Feb-03/3:36 PM | Reply
Quite right.
As "The Eye" testifies, I am the "Elephant Man".
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Feb-03/1:15 PM | Reply
the Sumerians are laughing at you. that last line is a keeper though.
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.143.153 | 13-Feb-03/10:40 AM | Reply
This thing made me think of the song "Obey the Cow God" by green jelly. but the poeme rocked less.
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