poemranker ::lilah by Sapphire

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 40694

lilah

Member since 2001 · Posted 17 Feb 2003 · 1 comment

summers rose tis fair and strong small the bud open, days long she grows swift, too soon gone cherish her true, through the song pink light soft, sweet and pure eyes bright and voice so sure scent divine, pleasured lure her smile tis lifes woe cure delicate nature like a pearl whispy tufts all a twirl loves emotion blissful swirl that- is mommies little girl

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 4.75 weighted 4.97 rank 8388 views 169 View voting details →

4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far

1 comment

[7] Shardik 17-Feb-03/11:19 PM Reply
Well. You would know. I believe that your images could tie in some how, more easily to what you are attempting to say here. If you did not push them so.