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lilah (Free verse) by Sapphire
summers rose tis fair and strong small the bud open, days long she grows swift, too soon gone cherish her true, through the song pink light soft, sweet and pure eyes bright and voice so sure scent divine, pleasured lure her smile tis lifes woe cure delicate nature like a pearl whispy tufts all a twirl loves emotion blissful swirl that- is mommies little girl

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8363
Posted: February 17, 2003 9:07 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 9:07 PM PST
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[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Feb-03/11:19 PM | Reply
Well. You would know. I believe that your images could tie in some how, more easily to what you are attempting to say here. If you did not push them so.
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