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lilah (Free verse) by Sapphire summers rose tis fair and strong
small the bud open, days long
she grows swift, too soon gone
cherish her true, through the song
pink light soft, sweet and pure
eyes bright and voice so sure
scent divine, pleasured lure
her smile tis lifes woe cure
delicate nature like a pearl
whispy tufts all a twirl
loves emotion blissful swirl
that- is mommies little girl
Up the ladder:
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Posted: February 17, 2003 9:07 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 9:07 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.970199 Overall Rank: 8401 Comments:
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
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17-Feb-03/11:19 PM
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