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20 most recent comments by razorgrin (221-240) and replies

Re: Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage 17-Feb-03/6:30 AM
Pretty damn good.
Re: Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 14-Feb-03/9:44 AM
the first was the best.
Re: For you, I'd make meatloaf by Venus 13-Feb-03/9:00 PM
Clever. The use of food is brilliant. Food symbolism is wondrous.
Re: Amputee by INTRANSIT 13-Feb-03/8:58 PM
very cool. thoroughly cool.
Re: a comment on Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin 13-Feb-03/8:53 PM
you seem to have an odd accent. 'Chased' can be 'chaste' or 'chased', however if it's the latter, it is best to indicate this. All things said, I love the term 'Assmuch'. I may change 'razorgrin' to 'assmuch'. maybe.
Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/8:47 PM
if you tried to edit it, you failed miserably.(b),that is the most shab-ass grade school attempt at a comeback I've ever read. worse than the rubber/glue thing. The poeme is bad. face it. last, I will continue to rank how I choose, sir.
Re: a comment on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/8:40 PM
your 'help' was idiotic. what doesn't make sense about this poeme being slush?
Re: a comment on Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin 13-Feb-03/8:00 PM
Ass is nice too. I like ass.
Re: Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/1:27 PM
true.
Re: a comment on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/1:22 PM
I appreciate it. have some cookies, they're made with the souls of the damned and sugar.
Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig 13-Feb-03/1:21 PM
impressive images.
Re: a comment on Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/1:19 PM
no, what? no, you can't or no, you can?
Re: Languageing by ==Doylum 13-Feb-03/1:14 PM
neato.
Re: a comment on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/1:12 PM
I was just proving that onefinger is a hypocritical dicksmack. that and today is Constant Cursing Thursday!
Re: a comment on Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin 13-Feb-03/1:10 PM
The uranium thing is mighty creepy. Agents of Loki, perhaps?

Both possibilities are valid, there's always the possibilities of third variables. Seriously, though, the poeme is about my frustration at the fact that psychology courses here focus only on the medical and behaviourist perspective. The cat is a representative of the school of thought given as little credit as psychoanalysis: quantum mechanics. that's it. no more symbolism, just dirty limericks and cthulhu from here on in.
Re: Beauty, sleeping by Ranger 13-Feb-03/1:05 PM
Kind of all over the place. The lines "hurl lettuces
And fairies
They cast a spell at me" cracked me up, though.
Re: Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/1:01 PM
I certainly don't dispute that statement.
Re: The Boys and Girls Club of London by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/12:59 PM
this had potential until the use of 'bod' to rhyme with "god". I had to take a break to finish giggling.
Re: Curse by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/12:56 PM
Childish rhyme scheme, boring mssage. Did you keep repeating "poet" so much to convince yourself that you actually are one? Man, I'm glad I don't have to worry about a poet's cusre. Oh, The Pain (tm) of onefingeruphiass's Deep Inexpressible Feelings(tm)!
Re: Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/12:53 PM
Milk is gross.


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