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Languageing (Free verse) by ==Doylum
He creates images he does in words what i don't know in an order thats 10 to 2 he makes comparisons what he calls similes and metaphors cause the're similar to 'is life he makes things pretty as a picture with colours what i could never use and with shapes you've never seen language listen boy, he almost makes it talk


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2222223
Weighted score: 6.111111
Overall Rank: 1101
Posted: February 13, 2003 6:39 AM PST; Last modified: February 13, 2003 6:39 AM PST
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[9] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 13-Feb-03/8:07 AM | Reply
how can ilisten when i am so caught up in looking at his face? he moves it.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.64.235.45 > <~> | 13-Feb-03/1:25 PM | Reply
Come again?
[9] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.53 | 13-Feb-03/1:14 PM | Reply
neato.
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Feb-03/4:02 PM | Reply
Chirpe... this will make me ponder the chirpensity of my soul while i'm shooting a coors light commercial in mammoth next week. thank you.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.64.229.162 > horus8 | 13-Feb-03/4:24 PM | Reply
Chirpe as in cheep cheep?
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > ==Doylum | 13-Feb-03/6:34 PM | Reply
No, no... chirpe as in that annoying fucking sound car alarms make. Chirpe as in the sound of a wounded cell phone stuck up my agent's ass. better?
[n/a] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 | 13-Feb-03/7:59 PM | Reply
Who me??? Or is this yet another poem about your penis??
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.64.238.127 > TanHand | 27-Feb-03/3:22 PM | Reply
did mother never say "it's not always about you darling"?
of course its about my cock you cock
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