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Languageing (Free verse) by ==Doylum

He creates images he does in words what i don't know in an order thats 10 to 2 he makes comparisons what he calls similes and metaphors cause the're similar to 'is life he makes things pretty as a picture with colours what i could never use and with shapes you've never seen language listen boy, he almost makes it talk

<~> 13-Feb-03/8:07 AM
how can ilisten when i am so caught up in looking at his face? he moves it.




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