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20 most recent comments by razorgrin (281-300) and replies

Re: a comment on Perversions by razorgrin 30-Jan-03/10:55 AM
As long as there are still odd fetishes, I will write about them. #4 is about a third done.
Re: a comment on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin 30-Jan-03/10:51 AM
I just wanted to write about Ed Gein. I can't tell what will be next, that would spoil the surprise. Keep out of my kitchen until the next batch of kink-cookies are baked.
Re: a comment on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin 30-Jan-03/10:48 AM
I am indeed creepy. Creepier when you see me. Your writing is reminiscent of Chuckie M., yes. You focus too much on the helter-skelter. I was more inspired by Issei Sagawa, Leopold von Sacher-Masoch, de Sade (you should read more), the music of Nick Cave and of Tom Waits and a personal fascination for the goddess Kali and the Aghori sect of Hinduism. And Surrealism and Dada.
Re: a comment on perversions 2: the revenge by razorgrin 30-Jan-03/10:42 AM
Look it up on Google. Germany in particular is known for the quality of its scat porn, known there as scheisse. Enjoy!
Re: Breaking Away by wickedemon4 29-Jan-03/6:45 AM
Well, that was quite the angst-wank. Surprised you could keep it up as long as you did. Go put on some damn clearasil.
Re: rememberance of things past by keatsImnot 29-Jan-03/6:42 AM
Eww..nationalism and poor writing. Fail!
Re: Mannequin (draft) by Ranger 29-Jan-03/6:40 AM
Nice, Pygmalion getting very frustrated. The violence is very well done, which is rare.
Re: Spring Rolls by Ranger 29-Jan-03/6:38 AM
We had spring rolls on New year's eve. As opposed to my longpig suggestion. I dig spring as a season, though not as an odour. 8, as it caused me to think of at least two things while reading it.
Re: Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 28-Jan-03/11:29 AM
Also, monk-man, did you misspell Buddha deliberately or was it due to the unfortunate positioning of your head in your sphincter at the time you first logged on?
Re: Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 28-Jan-03/11:28 AM
Yeah, I played through Chrono Trigger yesterday. The issue, buddaboy, is that you make monumentally foolish statements on subjects you know nothing about. Don't read a poem and complain that the really obvious references are over your head. Just stick to the shallow end next time.
Re: The Galenoi Saga by galiana 28-Jan-03/11:19 AM
Not bad. Not the highlight of my life, but not bad. Bunnybrat, do you even know more than one story from Greek mythology?
Re: Mom And Dad by thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Jan-03/11:14 AM
"Like, ohmygawd, my parents are SOOO unfair!! They won't let me out to do crystal meth on a school night and they even say I wear too much makeup! Ohmygawd, I'm like so totally pissed. I'm going to make really half-assed inarticulate poemes about how I want to kill them!" Kiddo, you write like a nu-metal Charlie Manson. Except I doubt you could get any followers. Tell you what. I'll take you out on a nice Hot Topic shopping spree and then drive you up to the mall where you can scare the preppie normals. Cheer up, Buttercup! What exactly is a 'massacure'? A really bad manicure? Oh, yeah, I know. It's the result of a Grade 8 American public school education. Here, a zero of spoooky ragin' teenage angst.
Re: Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 28-Jan-03/10:59 AM
Definitely needs a third. more alchemy poems please, but possibly get into the topic a little more.
Re: Hinged by Imperfections 23-Jan-03/1:47 PM
If you're having trouble squeezing through, a little fisting will loosen that up.:D
Re: What's the Point of Love? by loneshadow29 23-Jan-03/1:46 PM
The point of love? From a strictly biological standpoint, that particular combo of endorphins is to ensure that our genes will be passed on. Then you get into that other stuff. I'd normally say,"don't worry hon, you'll find someone right for you one day", but you likely won't. remember, "the only constant in all your failed relationships is you." Hugs 'n' zeros!
Re: Just Die Already... by loneshadow29 23-Jan-03/1:43 PM
Ow! The angst! That hurt. I think blades of steel might cause agony. The seat of the soul is not in the heart. for the last time,it's in the left buttock. As for the last line, that's pretty much the advice I'm trying to give you, gothboy. Oh...don't cry. Here, have a kleenex, your eyeliner's running.
Re: Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29 23-Jan-03/1:33 PM
I don't drink coffee.'Tis bad for you. I do indeed suffer from a pain fixation. No, I kid, i enjoy every second of it. Hugs 'n' kisses! Great poeme! You should come over to my basement and give a private reading... you aren't allergic to napalm, are you?
Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit 23-Jan-03/10:46 AM
have a comforting hug. i have nothing pointy concealed on my person.
Re: Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29 23-Jan-03/10:44 AM
There's always fiberglass insulation boxer biriefs or a nice razorwire g-string if the hemp undies seem too "hippie" for ya. lick the zero, baby. ohhh...yeah.. that's good.
Re: Jesus was the Antichrist by TheDevil 23-Jan-03/10:33 AM
giggle giggle.


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