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rememberance of things past (Free verse) by keatsImnot
Oh faded glory, tattered flag So long the leader,now the lag Not long ago you showed the World You led them all with flag unfurled With moral strong, you lit the way But as the dog, you've had your day Too long you wollowed in your past And like the hare you've come in last You strode ahead then took a rest You fell asleep, came second best The greatest Empire ever seen Has vanished,was it all a dream?. When did that bulldog spirit part Stiff upperlip, the lionheart Evaporated in the night Into the ether, lost to sight I wish we could regain some pride Once were warriors, now we hide.

Up the ladder: Hope and Fear
Down the ladder: Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12623
Posted: January 29, 2003 3:46 AM PST; Last modified: January 29, 2003 3:46 AM PST
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[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.143.146 | 29-Jan-03/6:42 AM | Reply
Eww..nationalism and poor writing. Fail!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.98 | 19-Feb-03/3:40 PM | Reply
Interesting that you decided to write about a remembrance of things past. Most people just ignore temporal limitations and dive straight into remembrances of future things. I'm jolly glad you made that clear in the title though, because otherwise I might have been rather confused. I can still remember the last time was rather confused. It was a week next Tuesday, and I had tried to blow my nose with a boiled egg.

P.S I'm afraid you have forgotten to remember the spelling of remembrance.
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.174.185 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 19-Feb-03/4:43 PM | Reply
dammit! he's NOT keats--he's PROUST!!!! trying to throw us rankers off the scent with a little misspelling, eh, monsieur?

well, it won't work!
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