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Other № 37623

Hinged

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Jan 2003 · 6 comments

Just a glimpse you always tease me, but I just can't squeeze through. Barely open but never closed, indecisive swinging door.

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6 comments

[9] wOrnella Mutiw 22-Jan-03/7:33 PM Reply
hmmmmm....lovely...here's another 9 for you....
[8] Shardik 22-Jan-03/9:59 PM Reply
What makes this an other? Still I kind of like it.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Jan-03/12:42 PM Reply
I like the way you've used hinges to symbolise your struggle to come to terms with abortion.
[n/a] horus8 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Jan-03/1:16 PM Reply
lol.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Jan-03/4:37 PM Reply
PS If you'd like some professional advice about such issues, the following website comes highly recommended:

http://www.museum.vic.gov.au/crust/mov1677t.html
[n/a] razorgrin 23-Jan-03/1:47 PM Reply
If you're having trouble squeezing through, a little fisting will loosen that up.:D