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Hinged (Other) by Imperfections Just a glimpse
you always tease me,
but I just can't squeeze through.
Barely open
but never closed,
indecisive
swinging door.
Up the ladder:
Companionship
Down the ladder:
Sometimes it Hurts...
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Posted: January 22, 2003 7:24 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 7:24 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9559 Comments:
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wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167
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22-Jan-03/7:33 PM
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hmmmmm....lovely...here's another 9 for you....
What makes this an other? Still I kind of like it.
I like the way you've used hinges to symbolise your struggle to come to terms with abortion.
lol.
PS If you'd like some professional advice about such issues, the following website comes highly recommended:
http://www.museum.vic.gov.au/crust/mov16
If you're having trouble squeezing through, a little fisting will loosen that up.:D
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