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American Idol epiphany in haiku (Haiku) by Shardik
Moses climbs mountain and discovers that God is a mad rock carver. Moses comes down the mountain to find a living room full of morons.

Up the ladder: ~*Broken Soul*~
Down the ladder: Invisible too

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2941175
Weighted score: 6.139855
Overall Rank: 1078
Posted: February 1, 2003 3:04 PM PST; Last modified: February 1, 2003 3:04 PM PST
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[8] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.5 | 1-Feb-03/3:14 PM | Reply
Moses was in Egypt. lol Just kidding. I like it.
[10] razorgrin @ 207.179.152.71 | 2-Feb-03/4:33 PM | Reply
that's it in a nutshell. an appropriate receptacle. 10. rock on.
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.179.211.68 | 2-Feb-03/6:12 PM | Reply
The last stanza makes me so tremendously happy. the first, not as much. This is worthy of a more universal title.
[7] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6 | 23-May-03/10:32 AM | Reply
hey I get it.
[1] capachijim @ 24.168.28.137 | 11-Jun-03/7:09 PM | Reply
WHAT??
[10] RealmOfSong @ 64.254.42.104 | 11-Jun-03/8:53 PM | Reply
I am quite fond of this... ^_^ The last stanza is really funny.
[n/a] Doug @ 205.188.117.6 > RealmOfSong | 11-Jun-04/6:44 PM | Reply
Sharpdick you are a sad little man.Try a new hobby.
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