Re: Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer	5-Jul-03/2:02 PM
one of the best 'winge about settle' poems. There should be an award
Re: Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz	5-Jul-03/1:58 PM
'we must learn to love one another AND die' and 'i will not go down under the ground/cos somebody tells me that deaths comin round' just a couple of quotes with reference to this transcription
Re: Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8	5-Jul-03/1:51 PM
bipolar disorder tends to work in cycles. If someone changes moods so quickly as that I suggest it is the cocaine not the bipolar. Nice though. Westerners are so precious with their illnesses
Re: Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	5-Jul-03/3:34 AM
Insightful and communicative
Re: SHAME AND THE OLD MANS CANDLE by Garrett S Sexton	5-Jul-03/3:24 AM
the tone of the poem seemed so benign as well. I didn't get it until the end clever
Re: Untitled #13 by david	4-Jul-03/1:36 PM
reads well. heavily influenced by biblical imagery I think painful in nature/ubiquitous in effect is a nice play on words nice simple words to build a picture, not too tied to loaded terms
Re: Lycanthropes and L-dopamine by horus8	4-Jul-03/8:27 AM
irreverent, funny role reversal do you mean L-DOPA in the title? the drug given to people with parkinsons that made them all schizophrenic
Re: Fall Of The Heartlands by Mr Pig	4-Jul-03/8:24 AM
fine selection of language, the traditional with the new the final line is good about the sword through the ventricles of a heartland. Streams as veins. I think the pneumatic part is mixing metaphors though. this is definitely one of your best
Re: Misgivings by Topaz Servias	4-Jul-03/8:19 AM
this needs a bit more of you in it, the lack of originality detracts from the feeling you want to get across. what I do like about this is the rhythm and sonority, even though you don't appear to be explicitly rhyming your words.
Re: Mirror to Mirror by Roisin	3-Jul-03/9:45 AM
reads well the title mirror mirror is a bit overused good ending structure, perhaps the words a bit cliched other than that good, I like your use of modern language
Re: Its Blue by aurora	3-Jul-03/9:33 AM
a tad meaningless nice poetic style though
Re: Orbiting Venus by scitz	3-Jul-03/6:54 AM
nice poem not entirely unpornographic though
Re: The Artists Creation by Kitch	3-Jul-03/6:53 AM
nothing he feels/ addict to a needle? what about withdrawal like the hyena analogy
Re: My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II	3-Jul-03/6:50 AM
let us for a moment pretend we were poets
Re: My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II	3-Jul-03/6:30 AM
I knew horus8 and jeremy b were the same but bachus? bachus was a shit to me the other day none of the others were glad you didn't mention me i'm kind of sensitive yours richard ps i have these thoughts sometimes too
Re: walking by Dangzter	3-Jul-03/6:26 AM
senseless addiction of america is a bit politicised and lacks subtelty. other than that this has a good musical rhythm, i like it
Re: a comment on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	2-Jul-03/8:03 AM
i meant a bit corny, a bit out of place
Re: a comment on STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck	1-Jul-03/1:14 PM
i kind of meant stigmata to do with the burning red to black. The kind of violent language, the tight skin
Re: STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck	1-Jul-03/11:08 AM
stigma an interesting word to use. i think of stigmata which draws a link with the first verse somehow in its explicitness.
Re: Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	1-Jul-03/11:03 AM
the computer feel is a bit corner. other than that it sets itself an ambition and answers it, well reasoned. cooking for food is an interesting link, Plath used to do lots of baking before writing.