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walking (Free verse) by Dangzter
I was walking down the street when
I stopped by a homeless man
Who was begging for money and
Was knelt on the floor with arms raised
I asked him kindly "why do you
need this money that you beg for?"
And he replied kindly " for the
roccs that lay on the ground and the
dirt that is burried in the earth"
Reluctantly I gave him the
money that would feed the senseless
addiction that america
fostered in this modern era
I walked away quitely and
watched from the corner of my eye
and saw the man buying roccs and
dirt that layed on the earth
sadly i regreted ever
walking.
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Posted: July 3, 2003 3:30 AM PDT; Last modified: July 3, 2003 3:30 AM PDT
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