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Heartbroken (Free verse) by PimpinBitch15
Heartbroken
Pieces of my heart
Is fluttering around you
You ignore it!
I can't understand
Why you left me crying
In shame
I have nobody to blame.
Because of me we broke up
I believed in what people told me
I didn't listen to you
Now we're seperated
Now my heart is torn
I cry because of you
I don't understand
Why I love you this much to cry
I told my friends
I didn't like you
It was a lie
Only a few people know
About the way I feel for you
I just wish
You'd know
Because of you I'm dating your brother
Wishing you to become jelous of us
I don't want you to feel hurt
But how does it feel?
You broke my heart
Now it's you turn
I'd wish to become in a relationship wish the one I love
That person is...you
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4
Weighted score: 4.6900725
Overall Rank: 12065
Posted: August 24, 2003 8:18 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2003 8:18 PM PDT
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