Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Heartbroken (Free verse) by PimpinBitch15
Heartbroken Pieces of my heart Is fluttering around you You ignore it! I can't understand Why you left me crying In shame I have nobody to blame. Because of me we broke up I believed in what people told me I didn't listen to you Now we're seperated Now my heart is torn I cry because of you I don't understand Why I love you this much to cry I told my friends I didn't like you It was a lie Only a few people know About the way I feel for you I just wish You'd know Because of you I'm dating your brother Wishing you to become jelous of us I don't want you to feel hurt But how does it feel? You broke my heart Now it's you turn I'd wish to become in a relationship wish the one I love That person is...you

Up the ladder: walking

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 20
.. 01
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 2.4
Weighted score: 4.6900725
Overall Rank: 12060
Posted: August 24, 2003 8:18 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2003 8:18 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[n/a] PimpinBitch15 @ 152.163.252.164 | 24-Aug-03/8:20 PM | Reply
This was a long time
[n/a] PimpinBitch15 @ 152.163.252.164 | 24-Aug-03/8:21 PM | Reply
This was a long time ago with lost love.
[2] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Aug-03/8:58 PM | Reply
Your grasp of the male penis is deluded by the fact that you are a gicantic clitoris, but slowly dehydrating from a lull in masturbation, due to your puny women arms.
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 68.76.44.117 | 24-Aug-03/10:17 PM | Reply
lolololololololololololol

i'm not glad i came back
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 24-Aug-03/10:24 PM | Reply
there once was a hoppedup from frisco
who hopped each train licketysplitsgo
one day with a burst
his pipe plugged the first
now he's spreadbout from here to hankletsgo
[7] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 12-May-04/2:53 AM | Reply
You are a snot gobbler.

In no way does this endless mass of cuntbutter deserve anything above an 8. This poem is a narcissistic mess and the imagery is some of the weakest I have ever read.
134 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001