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untitled (Free verse) by LatinQueen Once again we sit in silence
After all is said and done.
Only emptiness inside us,
Baby, look what we've become.
We can make promises,
But we still won't change.
It isn't right to stay together
When we only bring eachother pain
Up the ladder:
Captive
Down the ladder:
FatHairyWomen - Hey! Look! I'M INCREDIBLY DIM-WITTED!
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Posted: August 25, 2005 12:23 AM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2005 12:23 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.6900725 Overall Rank: 12067 Comments:
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Bethy @ 24.222.32.239
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25-Aug-05/4:52 AM
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simply said...good poem...:)Bethy *8*
i think mariah's verse is "we can make a million promises"
sorry...but it needs more meat. and...each other/ two words. And you forgot the ending period, since you used them throughout.
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