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Once again we sit in silence After all is said and done. Only emptiness inside us, Baby, look what we've become. We can make promises, But we still won't change. It isn't right to stay together When we only bring eachother pain
LilMsLadyPoet
28-Aug-05/8:42 PM
sorry...but it needs more meat. and...each other/ two words. And you forgot the ending period, since you used them throughout.
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