| Re: Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8 |
9-May-03/1:27 PM |
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oookk i know i dont have any room to talk since i havent logged in for like about 3 or 4 months but this takes the cake for the best/worst poem i ahve ever read. i am not sure wether to all it good or wether to call it bad because im sure of this: If i rate it 10 and say it is a great poem, on one of my ratings im sure to get from horus: ''you dont know what great it you are just some little bitch who still attends school and you cant write for jack so if i were you i would stop writing right now''. and im sure if i put something bad like: god horus your poems suck maybe you should stop writing you are just some gay fag who writes about his time on the street begging for mone to pay for his hospital bill because he got aids from some 'fag' on the street i am sure to get this kind of response on one of my poems horus: ''u little whore it is none of your business what i do and who i am'' and just on and on and on and on until finally i have to leave poemrankers or i have to do something drastic to make him/her stop so after thinking of all the possiblities of what could happen to me in the future for putting a negative/good comment i will rate him a 5 for it is between 10 and 1. Hopefully he dosent take the time to read my pointless comment and just browses around through the other ones and dosent think twice to read mine! I can only hope.
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| Re: The boy who shot birds by Bachus |
10-May-03/7:37 AM |
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''a homerun of shit'' is some of what you said to me and i am tired of your bullshit bachus I may not be as good of a writer or maybe not even half of a good writer that you may be but i am damn well certain of one thing, i dont like to be told that my poems are shit i would rather have it in a ranking rather than in words. I came to poemranker because i thought 'hey since im ONLY 12 and have nothing better to do why not enter my poems for rankings?' But as it turns out i would be hated by many so called poem wrietrs such as yourself. I try to deal with it, but since my in-matureness seems to control everything i am going to handle it the way i see fit. I would normally just cuss you out like any other normail 12 year old kid but i am not going to stoop to your level of using mean comments.(maybe i will) As your title says, the boy who shot birds, I wish it had been the birds who shot boys. You deserve every bit of what i am very pathetically trying to tell you. I think you are shit for telling me that and if i may say it just once more: My poems i like to call them my art. I call them that because thats what i want to call them dammit! My opinion has no sense of appeal to you anyway so i am going to wrap this up with a simple goodbye and if you ever think of writing comments like that on my poems i would think twice because if you think 3 of my poems are worth shit then there is no ned for you toread nay other of my poems! goodbye for now my poor soul
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30-May-03/4:55 AM |
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ummm....i may not know talent when i see it but this free-verse has a lot of potential...and it lacks a certain something...i can quite put my finger on it..o well...u can go rank mine now and put them all zeros!
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| Re: The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom |
8-Jul-03/10:26 AM |
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Um....Funny....Has a point, but....
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| Re: Dear Lord by simone_girard |
8-Jul-03/10:28 AM |
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wow....i like it, i cant understand why it is in the 'worst' place! Very confusing to me..I give it a 10
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| Re: blockbuster by bondjedi |
8-Jul-03/10:29 AM |
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
8-Jul-03/10:31 AM |
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Yet another limerick i dont understand, and for what i do not understand i give a 1
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8-Jul-03/10:32 AM |
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You are right, pointless it is and i do not understand why i waisted my time reading it...
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| Re: Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum |
5-Aug-03/6:55 AM |
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God,. i dont even want to begin to comment on this
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| Re: Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602 |
5-Aug-03/6:58 AM |
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Wow...I had a bf named joe, and i hated him very muhc but now i have learned to accept waht he did to me and now we are just friends, this poem is great. Im not only giving it a 10 bcuz i had an ex- named joe but even if i hadent had an ex- named joe i'd still give it a 10 bcuz it has a light to it that i cant explain
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| Re: Us by sk8rs_rule_all |
28-Aug-03/7:54 PM |
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| Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub |
28-Aug-03/7:57 PM |
i have no words to express my feelings, BUT I DO HAVE NUMBERS! 10, yay!
-im a spaz please dont pay attention to me-
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| Re: The back of a shovel? by horus8 |
17-Jan-04/6:11 PM |
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Damn, reminds me of my friend....the sad pathetic yet poetic soul.
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| Re: Love is Like a Rose by justjay |
17-Jan-04/6:13 PM |
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| Re: Love is Like a Rose by justjay |
17-Jan-04/6:13 PM |
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I think its good....very....actually
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| Re: If only by sk8rs_rule_all |
17-Jan-04/6:22 PM |
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Too many if onlys' in our lives and i figured this would do justice to one of them in some of yours.
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| Re: "My Love" by wickedemon4 |
24-Jul-04/12:23 PM |
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The thong part did it for me, i dont like it.
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| Re: in love by crystal4 |
25-May-05/12:30 PM |
Dove and Love......
truely original.
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| Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco |
20-Nov-05/4:25 PM |
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I absoutely love the way you write.
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| Re: Fuck the stars by Patrice727 |
20-Nov-05/4:41 PM |
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