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"My Love" (Lyric) by wickedemon4
I've loved you ever since we've been together, And I hope we will be together forever. We have been together for so long, I still remember the first time you let me pull down that thong. And it hurts me so bad, Every single time I see you sad. I would kill me if we ever parted, So please don't leave me broken hearted. Even though we always fight, We make up every night. I hope you never go far from me, Do you remember when we carved our names in that tree? The flame inside is now a bon fire, It's getting so strong that it will never expire. My love for you will mend or kill, We could even be a famous couple like Jack and Jill. And I hope you will always be mine, Because I will love you until the end of time. By, Robbie Miller

Up the ladder: scotty dog
Down the ladder: youth in asia

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.7857144
Weighted score: 3.3812275
Overall Rank: 13611
Posted: November 25, 2002 10:17 PM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2002 10:17 PM PST
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Comments:
[3] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 26-Nov-02/3:48 AM | Reply
I wrote something like this once for my girlfriend.

She finished with me and looking back who could blame her?
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.247 | 26-Nov-02/7:10 PM | Reply
Pimple poem deluxe. It is true. In one week the site has gone to complete hell. Cannot you people just go to the journal sites and spew your nonsense. Are you British?
[0] sk8rs_rule_all @ 24.160.153.131 | 24-Jul-04/12:23 PM | Reply
The thong part did it for me, i dont like it.
[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.178.126.155 | 16-May-06/5:26 AM | Reply
Very funny. I love bonfire being 2 words. Hard to know if this is intentionally bad, if so 10/10. But I think you don't know any better, so 0/10. Keep up the funny work as I am smiling happily at this.
[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.13.138 | 21-Jun-06/4:44 AM | Reply
Truly terrible apart from the thong bit. Thongs for the memory!
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