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"My Love"

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Nov 2002 · 5 comments

I've loved you ever since we've been together, And I hope we will be together forever. We have been together for so long, I still remember the first time you let me pull down that thong. And it hurts me so bad, Every single time I see you sad. I would kill me if we ever parted, So please don't leave me broken hearted. Even though we always fight, We make up every night. I hope you never go far from me, Do you remember when we carved our names in that tree? The flame inside is now a bon fire, It's getting so strong that it will never expire. My love for you will mend or kill, We could even be a famous couple like Jack and Jill. And I hope you will always be mine, Because I will love you until the end of time. By, Robbie Miller

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5 comments

[3] Caducus 26-Nov-02/3:48 AM Reply

I wrote something like this once for my girlfriend.

She finished with me and looking back who could blame her?

[0] poetandknowit 26-Nov-02/7:10 PM Reply

Pimple poem deluxe. It is true. In one week the site has gone to complete hell. Cannot you people just go to the journal sites and spew your nonsense. Are you British?

[0] sk8rs_rule_all 24-Jul-04/12:23 PM Reply

The thong part did it for me, i dont like it.

[2] Edna Sweetlove 16-May-06/5:26 AM Reply

Very funny. I love bonfire being 2 words. Hard to know if this is intentionally bad, if so 10/10. But I think you don't know any better, so 0/10. Keep up the funny work as I am smiling happily at this.

[2] Edna Sweetlove 21-Jun-06/4:44 AM Reply

Truly terrible apart from the thong bit. Thongs for the memory!