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youth in asia (Limerick) by suckmychucks
Robert Smith is hanging over my bed. His hair is wild and covers the eyes on his head. If he could see what I do underneath, I’m sure he would hang me instead.

Up the ladder: "My Love"
Down the ladder: Mask

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.7692308
Weighted score: 3.369177
Overall Rank: 13612
Posted: April 9, 2003 12:06 PM PDT; Last modified: April 9, 2003 12:06 PM PDT
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Comments:
[1] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Apr-03/9:26 PM | Reply
There is no "cure" for low self esteem.
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.143.141 | 10-Apr-03/11:07 AM | Reply
Lame-ass goth schmuck. I should have guessed. Your eyeliner is crooked.
[0] asimpleman @ 202.141.239.129 | 11-Apr-03/3:32 AM | Reply
why don't u hang urself.........might b something u do right
[n/a] suckmychucks @ 64.41.24.245 > asimpleman | 11-Apr-03/8:11 PM | Reply
hang myself? wanna watch? oh yeah? you like that? YOU LIKE THAT??
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.136 > suckmychucks | 15-Apr-03/11:29 AM | Reply
I do.
[1] travelingsk8er @ 68.7.187.148 | 28-Nov-04/5:59 PM | Reply
uhhh.no
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.80.221 | 14-May-06/3:06 AM | Reply
Unfunny. Unclever. And it's not a limerick. Dreadful in short.
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