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"My Love" (Lyric) by wickedemon4

I've loved you ever since we've been together, And I hope we will be together forever. We have been together for so long, I still remember the first time you let me pull down that thong. And it hurts me so bad, Every single time I see you sad. I would kill me if we ever parted, So please don't leave me broken hearted. Even though we always fight, We make up every night. I hope you never go far from me, Do you remember when we carved our names in that tree? The flame inside is now a bon fire, It's getting so strong that it will never expire. My love for you will mend or kill, We could even be a famous couple like Jack and Jill. And I hope you will always be mine, Because I will love you until the end of time. By, Robbie Miller

Edna Sweetlove 16-May-06/5:26 AM
Very funny. I love bonfire being 2 words. Hard to know if this is intentionally bad, if so 10/10. But I think you don't know any better, so 0/10. Keep up the funny work as I am smiling happily at this.




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