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If only (Free verse) by sk8rs_rule_all
If only i hadent been such a fool as to believe the evil words you said. I hate myself,everyone hates me! 'you' made my life like this. 'You' screwed up my life! I cant go back and fix it because you have done too much damage to my life.If only i had walked away from you sooner. If only i had not had your baby, i would not be standing here waiting for the fucken milk to get warm! If only i had listened to my parents. If only i haden't trusted you. If only.......If only i had said...no.

Up the ladder: Change
Down the ladder: Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11764
Posted: May 16, 2003 4:58 PM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2003 4:58 PM PDT
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[n/a] sk8rs_rule_all @ 24.160.153.131 | 17-Jan-04/6:22 PM | Reply
Too many if onlys' in our lives and i figured this would do justice to one of them in some of yours.
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