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Change (Free verse) by Derge
Blood smeared candy lust. Etenity. penatrate. sex canal. Women. belly. fast mother. Tremble naked, breath, scream. Exquisite Power. Golden summers. Spring moons. Taste pleasure. Love Worship. Drunk pink love lust. Empty velvet. Death.
Up the ladder: Independence?
Down the ladder: If only
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11763
Posted: April 13, 2003 1:04 AM PDT; Last modified: April 13, 2003 1:04 AM PDT
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[2] maffy @ 195.92.194.13 | 14-Apr-03/3:13 PM | Reply
shit
[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Apr-03/3:03 AM | Reply
It would work if you could fucking spell.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Apr-03/3:42 PM | Reply
"Etenity" that's a brand of hip hopper shoes right yo? lol.
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