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by Derge

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

Blood smeared candy lust. Etenity. penatrate. sex canal. Women. belly. fast mother. Tremble naked, breath, scream. Exquisite Power. Golden summers. Spring moons. Taste pleasure. Love Worship. Drunk pink love lust. Empty velvet. Death.

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[2] maffy 14-Apr-03/3:13 PM Reply
shit
[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos 15-Apr-03/3:03 AM Reply
It would work if you could fucking spell.
[n/a] horus8 15-Apr-03/3:42 PM Reply
"Etenity" that's a brand of hip hopper shoes right yo? lol.