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in love (Free verse) by crystal4 when you find your one
dont let him go
because you may never
see them again
when you are in love
you will know
for then the happiness
shall begin
your thoughts will vanish
and your world will shape
its like starting
with a brand new tape
but if you find that
special someone before
they find you there
will be nothing but
sorrow and then by
tomorrow you will see
that you are in love
now fly away like a dove
Up the ladder:
IN ONE LONG NIGHT
Down the ladder:
The regrets made me voids
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Posted: March 9, 2005 5:51 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2005 5:51 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11255 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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truely original.
i think it is truly original too.