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Lyric № 107369

escape

Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Jul 2004 · 2 comments

i'd like to be able to fly like a bird far away from the problems that dwell in our world i wish i could pull the covers over my head forget about life and go back to bed or i'd be a sailor and ride off to sea surrounded by water perhaps i'd be free i'd like to escape if just for a while but running away is just not my style i'm quite claustrophic my problems move near is there no escape from our fear

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[9] titan69 5-Jul-04/2:20 PM Reply
very good like it
[2] edpeterson 6-Jul-04/7:04 AM Reply
problems that dwell in our world???