Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

escape (Lyric) by moonlightdance
i'd like to be able to fly like a bird far away from the problems that dwell in our world i wish i could pull the covers over my head forget about life and go back to bed or i'd be a sailor and ride off to sea surrounded by water perhaps i'd be free i'd like to escape if just for a while but running away is just not my style i'm quite claustrophic my problems move near is there no escape from our fear

Up the ladder: The Stinging
Down the ladder: Tomorrow's Dance

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 20
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11243
Posted: July 5, 2004 6:48 AM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2004 6:48 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[9] titan69 @ 62.31.24.65 | 5-Jul-04/2:20 PM | Reply
very good like it
[2] edpeterson @ 68.79.1.86 | 6-Jul-04/7:04 AM | Reply
problems that dwell in our world???
160 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001