poemranker ::Fuck the stars by Patrice727

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Free verse № 15090

Fuck the stars

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Sep 2002 · Edited 14 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

I gaze toward the sky and see the stars they're not millions of miles away they're not that big they're only speckles, to me just out of reach who cares what they are to the satelites in space? I'm not a satelite and i'm stuck in this place This "science" is a joke, how is it real? All that matters in life is how you feel To a blind man, stars don't exist he can't hear them, smell them, they're nothing thats missed If one thing could be said by a man without eyes it is "all i can see, is that we all die"

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[5] god'swife 15-Sep-02/12:37 PM Reply
Satellite.
[10] sk8rs_rule_all 20-Nov-05/4:41 PM Reply
lovely.