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Fuck the stars (Free verse) by Patrice727
I gaze toward the sky and see the stars they're not millions of miles away they're not that big they're only speckles, to me just out of reach who cares what they are to the satelites in space? I'm not a satelite and i'm stuck in this place This "science" is a joke, how is it real? All that matters in life is how you feel To a blind man, stars don't exist he can't hear them, smell them, they're nothing thats missed If one thing could be said by a man without eyes it is "all i can see, is that we all die"


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Arithmetic Mean: 5.818182
Weighted score: 5.409091
Overall Rank: 3081
Posted: September 14, 2002 7:47 AM PDT; Last modified: September 14, 2002 8:27 AM PDT
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[5] god'swife @ 209.179.211.246 | 15-Sep-02/12:37 PM | Reply
Satellite.
[10] sk8rs_rule_all @ 24.160.154.168 | 20-Nov-05/4:41 PM | Reply
lovely.
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