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Us (Haiku) by sk8rs_rule_all
You dont like me I dont like you. Just let me be and turn blue.

Up the ladder: Havin a Slash
Down the ladder: genious

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.462117
Overall Rank: 12867
Posted: July 28, 2003 12:26 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2003 12:26 PM PDT
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Jul-03/12:30 PM | Reply
We by Me

You dont like pee
I dont like poo.
Just let me pee
and turn into a spice girl.
[7] richa @ 81.86.226.130 | 28-Jul-03/12:36 PM | Reply
not a haiku, last line was funny though
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > richa | 28-Jul-03/12:45 PM | Reply
It has the correct syllabol count.
[n/a] sk8rs_rule_all @ 24.160.153.131 | 28-Aug-03/7:54 PM | Reply
o so wize horus....very
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Aug-03/7:58 PM | Reply
I have an idea... Let's pretend you are a nigger. And I'm the guy with the rope, the cross, the tree, and more importantly. The time. Then let's send you to Rascoe's to pick us up some chicken waffles.
[n/a] sk8rs_rule_all @ 24.160.153.131 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 28-Dec-03/2:23 PM | Reply
I know, lets pretend i have a gun and a knife and your all by yourself. and more importantly the one with the BULLETS! go fuck a tree asshole.
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