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Havin a Slash (Free verse) by Blade
Oooooo it hurts, It really starts to burn Oooooo it hurts, You feel it start to turn. Oooooo it hurts, A bit like pickled ham Oooooo it hurts, It smells a bit like spam. Oooooo it hurts, It still pangs all the same. Oooooo it hurts, You've just shat out your brain.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.462117
Overall Rank: 12866
Posted: April 22, 2003 4:22 AM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2003 4:22 AM PDT
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Comments:
[0] Ranger @ 212.140.115.64 | 22-Apr-03/10:23 AM | Reply
Dude, what the fuck? I assume you're not talking about your own brain, cause on the evidence of this you wouldn't even notice if you shat it out. Funny poem though...
(0 to try and get you into the bottom 15)
[n/a] Blade @ 80.1.31.245 > Ranger | 23-Apr-03/3:05 AM | Reply
Hey cant you appreciate pure..... unadulterated.....sheer....................CRAp wen u c it
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA im quite mad really!!!>:P
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Apr-03/1:06 PM | Reply
Lemmy & motorhead have a new song called the 'face of gaids' it jams. check it out.
[0] Ranger @ 213.120.56.37 > Shardik | 23-Apr-03/11:25 AM | Reply
Kickass!
[0] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 20-May-03/9:17 AM | Reply
0, and 0 again if I could
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