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Havin a Slash (Free verse) by Blade

Oooooo it hurts, It really starts to burn Oooooo it hurts, You feel it start to turn. Oooooo it hurts, A bit like pickled ham Oooooo it hurts, It smells a bit like spam. Oooooo it hurts, It still pangs all the same. Oooooo it hurts, You've just shat out your brain.

Ranger 22-Apr-03/10:23 AM
Dude, what the fuck? I assume you're not talking about your own brain, cause on the evidence of this you wouldn't even notice if you shat it out. Funny poem though...
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