on Ode To Mushroomhead by Beseech
16 May 2003, 7:58 AM
Ye-es
on Jokie Smurf by Bachus
16 May 2003, 7:52 AM
Marvellous as always Mr. B.
replying on AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}>
8 May 2003, 1:55 PM
Even though the last one isn't really a limerick...
on AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}>
8 May 2003, 1:54 PM
Yikes! Funny, very funny most certainly.
I'd like to see "even gets" changed around, it sounds better. 8
I'd like to see "even gets" changed around, it sounds better. 8
replying on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger
7 May 2003, 12:37 PM
I will have a think about that and see what I can come up with for the fairies. Thanks for the advice, I like the way this one's progressing.
replying on Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8
7 May 2003, 12:18 PM
That is, based on the assumption that 'anonymosity' is in reality a word.
on Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8
7 May 2003, 12:17 PM
Not deserving a blue 1, I wish people would say why they give these low marks but hey that's just me being a whiny Brit. Great poem, I wanted to give it an 8 but instead it shall have a nine to try to balance the anonymosity.
on You wash up, I forget. by Bachus
7 May 2003, 12:12 PM
Yep, as with your last few I enjoyed this one a great deal. Really well done. 8
replying on Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger
4 May 2003, 9:22 AM
Yes, I know.
on he was the one i had written about before i met him 2 by rockinindividual
2 May 2003, 1:21 PM
I love it.
on kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual
2 May 2003, 1:19 PM
Nice, opener is wicked. What more can I say? 9
I would love for you to let me know what you think of my latest effort, the fairytale one.
I would love for you to let me know what you think of my latest effort, the fairytale one.
A sweetly written piece. I know you must love to write but submitting 3 or 4 at a time won't get you that far. Contain your poetry and submit it in smaller, bitesize chunks and let us savour each morsel. Right I'm talking bollocks now, I'll shut up. Don't cheer.
Nice song anyway.
Nice song anyway.
on Sir John Betjeman is dead Nicholas. by Bachus
2 May 2003, 1:05 PM
*sniff* Beautiful...so true to life. Fucking English cunts. Can't stand them.
Heh heh heh...made me laugh mucho, I see you have an 8 and a 10 so let the average roll. 9
Heh heh heh...made me laugh mucho, I see you have an 8 and a 10 so let the average roll. 9
replying on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8
2 May 2003, 12:46 PM
Most certainly.
replying on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
29 Apr 2003, 10:45 AM
My pleasure.
AT LAST THE COLLEGE HAS UNBLOCKED THE RANKER!!!
I am now in a generous mood, have a ten on the house.