on Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone
21 Apr 2005, 1:38 AM
Ha! Yes please guvn'or!
replying on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_
21 Apr 2005, 1:33 AM
Mostly the "-ation" so often (which I think someone's already commented on).
I also appreciated the fact that you had the presence of mind to let people know this is a 'pimple', yet so many others slate it as though you'd been trying to write Byron. That made me chuckle.
I also appreciated the fact that you had the presence of mind to let people know this is a 'pimple', yet so many others slate it as though you'd been trying to write Byron. That made me chuckle.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
19 Apr 2005, 2:23 PM
Possibly the most convincing incentive for me to attend Church and become anorexic. In that order. If the Lord is not proud of you, I would be most terribly surprised. God bless.
on Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
19 Apr 2005, 2:13 PM
You, sir, are the reason I couldn't keep my as yet unbrowned hands from this site.
replying on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
19 Apr 2005, 1:26 PM
Ever considered Polyfilla?
on Five on Buddha against Bruce Lee by Luzr
19 Apr 2005, 1:21 PM
ha!
on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_
19 Apr 2005, 1:14 PM
Oddly enough the big votes here do seem to go with the big words rather than the big attitudes. I liked being shouted at although a couple of the rhymes weren't my cup of tea (although I'm in no position to criticise other peoples' rhymes), 8 from me.
on The Incubation by oneglove
17 Apr 2005, 1:10 PM
Glorious
on the Dreamer by darylchew
17 Apr 2005, 1:08 PM
I guarantee people on this highly-accommodating site will slate this. Make it humorous and you might convert them. Perhaps after the 'will he ever act' you could put something like 'will he remember to breathe?' or maybe 'will he contract AIDS?' (although the answer to that seems quite obvious to me).
It's a decent start, and as someone wise on here said to me, not necessarily in these exact words, be unto yourself true. If you like your poetry that's the most important thing - unless of course you harbour dreams of getting them published. Then you have to pander to the masses. 7
It's a decent start, and as someone wise on here said to me, not necessarily in these exact words, be unto yourself true. If you like your poetry that's the most important thing - unless of course you harbour dreams of getting them published. Then you have to pander to the masses. 7
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT
17 Apr 2005, 1:03 PM
I've often been mildly curious as to what NASDAQ means, but not nearly enough so that I bothered to find out. Ah, the power of acronyms.
Also, I feel a need to express my rage at the uselessness of this disk, upon whose digital memory I inscribed my latest masterpieces, and whose incompatibility with my computer was almost predictible enough to be amusing. Almost.
Also, I feel a need to express my rage at the uselessness of this disk, upon whose digital memory I inscribed my latest masterpieces, and whose incompatibility with my computer was almost predictible enough to be amusing. Almost.
on Virgin Poet by emilyowey
17 Apr 2005, 12:59 PM
Preach my pain also, oh how I long for those youthful days too. I appreciate this. 9
on The Layer of Black by emilyowey
17 Apr 2005, 12:55 PM
As a student I feel obliged to be wracked with guilt at not being black, impoverished or in prison (or any combination thereof)
on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT
17 Apr 2005, 12:53 PM
Lovely, I particularly liked the fountain and the exchange of stone to grass.
The Stock Exchange on weed...that would be something worth seeing
The Stock Exchange on weed...that would be something worth seeing
replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub
26 May 2003, 11:35 AM
You are too critical to yourself, most of your poems are miles better than anything that I can manage-not that that's saying anything, but still.
Hey Bill, I like the content but it didn't seem right reading with all the breaks-it's just my opinion but I think it needs to be more together...other than, it rocks!
Hey Bill, I like the content but it didn't seem right reading with all the breaks-it's just my opinion but I think it needs to be more together...other than, it rocks!
on Recipe for Regaining Youth by Blade
18 May 2003, 11:54 AM
This has currently only got one comment-mine-and I really can't see that changing. However I would urge everybody who read it to vote it a zero; who knows we might just get this one an average of 0.00
Let me lead the way.
Let me lead the way.
replying on The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT
18 May 2003, 11:51 AM
I believe that the true point is just where the pen meets the paper, but I could be wrong.
on My Nieghborhood(2) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
18 May 2003, 11:49 AM
Yeah I suppose it does need editing, but I actually really like the way this one's going! 7
on Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig
18 May 2003, 11:42 AM
It does seem a bit too loose in places, and 'I was very angry with God' doesn't really do credit to your ability. Even so it's an enjoyable read, and nice to see people trying something a bit more traditional/ classical (and succeeding!) 9
on Not quite myselfs. by cleverdevice
18 May 2003, 11:38 AM
Yep.