poemranker ::ab*defg by Goad

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Free verse № 123711

ab*defg

by Goad

Member since 2004 · Posted 19 Apr 2005 · Edited 19 Apr 2005 · 6 comments

God I hate the third letter-- it's so dupli*itous. Hard or soft? Whi*h are you, *? You should learn from your *ousin: be either hard & unambiguous, or just shut the fu*k up.

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[n/a] Ranger 19-Apr-05/1:27 PM Reply
ye-es...you can, of course, remove keys from the keyboard.
[9] richa 19-Apr-05/3:17 PM Reply
fu*king bit*h why the fu*k am i not allowed to use the letter 'c'.
[n/a] middenHeap › richa 19-Apr-05/5:01 PM Reply
be*ause it's disrespe*tful to *hristians, you fu*king *unt.
[n/a] middenHeap 19-Apr-05/5:10 PM Reply
This needs an edit: first line diminishes the last.
[n/a] Goad › middenHeap 19-Apr-05/5:14 PM Reply
Done. Stop being schizoid and go to bed.
[10] INTRANSIT 20-Apr-05/7:27 AM Reply
Wrapped for my protection. Ha! I needed a good laugh.
two full hands.