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ab*defg (Free verse) by Goad
God I hate the third letter-- it's so dupli*itous. Hard or soft? Whi*h are you, *? You should learn from your *ousin: be either hard & unambiguous, or just shut the fu*k up.

Up the ladder: Parasite
Down the ladder: Grass Stains

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3367
Posted: April 19, 2005 6:04 AM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2005 5:13 PM PDT
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[n/a] Ranger @ 131.251.0.55 | 19-Apr-05/1:27 PM | Reply
ye-es...you can, of course, remove keys from the keyboard.
[9] richa @ 81.178.246.197 | 19-Apr-05/3:17 PM | Reply
fu*king bit*h why the fu*k am i not allowed to use the letter 'c'.
[n/a] middenHeap @ 80.132.253.209 > richa | 19-Apr-05/5:01 PM | Reply
be*ause it's disrespe*tful to *hristians, you fu*king *unt.
[n/a] middenHeap @ 80.132.253.209 | 19-Apr-05/5:10 PM | Reply
This needs an edit: first line diminishes the last.
[n/a] Goad @ 80.132.253.209 > middenHeap | 19-Apr-05/5:14 PM | Reply
Done. Stop being schizoid and go to bed.
[10] INTRANSIT @ 204.110.228.254 | 20-Apr-05/7:27 AM | Reply
Wrapped for my protection. Ha! I needed a good laugh.
two full hands.
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