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ab*defg (Free verse) by Goad

God I hate the third letter-- it's so dupli*itous. Hard or soft? Whi*h are you, *? You should learn from your *ousin: be either hard & unambiguous, or just shut the fu*k up.

middenHeap 19-Apr-05/5:10 PM
This needs an edit: first line diminishes the last.




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