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The Incubation (Free verse) by oneglove
I know the skyâs not falling
But Iâm positive the roof is caving in
The walls have gotten tighter
Only Pandora's box remains
There is no refuge
There is no place to hide and bury my mind and pretend everythingâs ok
No blanket, no matter what the size, can cover these indiscretions
Believe me Iâve tried.
Iâve curled up tight
Remembering nine long months, warm and fed
Nine long months, only inches from the world we live
Where things are good versus evil
But apathy always wins
It doesnât matter how small the ball, I still lie exposed
And no matter where my mind I still absorb the blows
Ignorance brings only a slow and rhythmic death
You can shelter me
Let me nurture and grow
Rejoicing in every kick, in every lesson learned
And I,
I will rely on You
Youâll provide for every need;for any food, shelter or love I may need
Keeping me inches from the world we live
But I don't accept
And I don't know why
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6099
Posted: April 15, 2005 9:03 AM PDT; Last modified: December 5, 2005 11:43 PM PST
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