poemranker ::Elusive Dream by nicole081083

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Elusive Dream

Member since 2004 · Posted 7 Jun 2005 · 0 comments

I'm falling, falling hard My feelings for you caught me off guard If you only knew The number of times I've wanted to hold you And the times you've entered my dreams It never fails, or it seems Just when you're lying there in my arms I wake up and my clock alarms And I realize my dream can never come true Because I can never, never have you

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