Re: Death is a Three Step Process by dancin_n_da_moonlite	16-Mar-05/8:19 AM
Good work on an easy form made difficult (and better}.
Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite	16-Mar-05/8:16 AM
We all see the world through glass. I see it through the glass of a wine bottle. Sometimes I see the world through the glass of the Cathode Ray Tube. Glass is(at least)obvious where our own prejudices and cultural filters are not.
Re: JJ’s Church by Dovina	16-Mar-05/8:10 AM
I'll never go to another steakhouse bar and feel secular again. JJ's Steakhouse Church is a holey (sic) place
Re: Sauvignon by Dovina	12-Mar-05/5:26 PM
2buckchuck&awinesnob. This is a lovely cock-tale of deceit.-10-
Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33	9-Mar-05/5:02 AM
Nice, tight, little rant. Good diet, too. If you shove all that stuff up your... It never gets into your blood stream to clog your arteries.
Re: Fastso by Dovina	6-Mar-05/9:41 PM
Must U rite such gay poems allathe time? Do you know that they make lipstick out of suet? "suety gang..."
Re: a comment on Advertising says: by Dovina	2-Mar-05/11:37 AM
You forget (Curry+toothache+beer)/2 in your equation-- but you're right anyway. Perhaps curry = 0.
Re: Advertising says: by Dovina	2-Mar-05/8:44 AM
You are at your best when you do the math. The feeling I get from this poem is “Ennui and TV.”
Re: Summing Up by Dovina	20-Feb-05/10:05 PM
Nicely put.
Re: Hunger by Dovina	20-Feb-05/10:03 PM
What means "up utensils I indulge in" or "me a plate of food?" I guess you can't start reading just anywhere and have it make sense. However, in some African countries or on a plane wreck in the Andes, "me a plate of food" does work.
Re: Piercings by PsydewaysTears	16-Feb-05/12:27 AM
I liked the concept and the twist at the end. Some rhymes could have been a bit "weirder" in keeping with the subject, for example: Some people pierce "down under" below the waist; above the knees. Wait a minute! Does that make it sound like an Australian piercing? Your poem works for me. -9-
Re: Pillow Talk by horus8	16-Feb-05/12:18 AM
May I count to 100 by -10-'s?
Re: Insanity by Lifeboatman	16-Feb-05/12:14 AM
As a man trapped in a woman's body, I must confess that you are right. -10-
Re: The Man I Love by Dovina	16-Feb-05/12:10 AM
This poem is sweeter than Splenda.-10-
Re: Girly by Dovina	6-Feb-05/9:57 AM
I really like this poem. It is very light-hearted with much sarcasm. I believe the last four lines would be better re-arranged as follows: "but I’m better off girly than a poetess, surely this poem of mine doesn't seem to rhyme" It puts the heavy-handed "girly conclusion" inside the poem and makes the end a "typically girly" comment(in the sacastic sense in which you write about the subject of girliness).
Re: "I" became "We" by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.	26-Jan-05/7:38 AM
Never give up. God's got sumpthang, etc. -8-
Re: a comment on Memphis Skyline by wilco	26-Jan-05/7:35 AM
I remember ordering dinner at a Ponderosa Steakhouse in Dallas. The waitress stopped me in mid-sentence to tell me, "Y'all sure do talk funny." I guess it goes both ways. Sorry to mention that "Y'all sure do talk funny."
Re: Memphis Skyline by wilco	25-Jan-05/7:48 PM
Good lyric. The line "sitting on the banks" makes me wonder if it should be "sitting on the bank." I don't know if Memphis has several rivers with banks upon which to sit or a river with one bank and another on the other side. Still, I like it-9-.
Re: a comment on Feudal Conflict by Dovina	25-Jan-05/7:35 PM
Good info. But when my cousin, Gaston, taught me to play chess 50 years ago, he Told me it was the Persians (Sinbad the Sailor people) who invented chess. Of course, he was the one who told me that there was a kid-eating monster living in the hall closet (close to the restroom)that ate children when they wandered out of their room at night. Needless to say, I got very good at holding my water 'til morning (most of the time).
Re: a comment on Feudal Conflict by Dovina	25-Jan-05/3:28 PM
D, did you mean maybe odor or maybly older? Chess is much odr than the Geeks. I always thought it was an Arabic or Persian game.