| Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined |
30-Jun-08/8:31 AM |
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Even better on the 2nd read.
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| Re: Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer |
31-May-08/2:44 PM |
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Are you fucking my wife? Of course not, it's just that the mood of this poem is familiar.
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| Re: a comment on wam bam by malpaso |
28-Apr-08/8:38 AM |
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| Re: People write funny things by Garrett S Sexton |
26-Apr-08/12:38 AM |
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Puddles of bloody poodles could be a follow-up.
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| Re: look upon my works by nentwined |
26-Apr-08/12:33 AM |
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Quote the maven, "Nevermore!"
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| Re: wam bam by malpaso |
26-Apr-08/12:29 AM |
Are you calling the USA a bottom?
Vaseline (another petroleum product)will break the condom. Better to use butt-er.
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| Re: On Youth Revisited by vulcan |
26-Apr-08/12:23 AM |
My new face is...younger than before...a chaos
Of Nightingales and flow'rs.
Yeah. Works for me.
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| Re: you've returned i'm glad by richa |
21-Aug-07/11:58 AM |
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I can see this poem is not about the return of your mind.
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| Re: Death Beseech You by polaroidmemory |
27-Mar-07/10:44 AM |
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| Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt |
11-Mar-07/11:14 AM |
I agree hole(as in cunt)-heartedly. Youse a dynamic IP. I get shocks from thos statics.
PS- Try nihsuuhS and comment sdrawkcab.
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| Re: i feel so cold by minty871 |
11-Mar-07/11:07 AM |
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You might want to make a left on Valentine's day and find some body to keep you warm.
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| Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus! |
24-Oct-06/6:30 AM |
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This is a suicide note, right?
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| Re: Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac |
11-Sep-06/9:36 AM |
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"old bottles that the river brung" and "all this from in the house, but it was not of us," sucked me under the house with the rest of the junk. You really are a poet, Damn You!
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| Re: a comment on Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove |
23-May-06/11:57 AM |
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| Re: Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove |
23-May-06/10:44 AM |
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This poem is excellent but for one fact. The dead will have, on occasion, a bowel movement after bacteria and gas have their way with food left in stomach and intestines. So, one may shit and not be. Sorry.
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| Re: Runaway by Cairsten |
29-Dec-05/10:13 AM |
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| Re: Hoi Polloi by INTRANSIT |
26-Dec-05/7:22 PM |
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| Re: why? by nentwined |
26-Dec-05/7:18 PM |
A good pimple but for a great pimple the end has to be about "Her."
How about?
"outweighed by You, you fat-assed, blood-sucking, faithless whore! But I will take you back,
if you ask." That's a pimple '10.'
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| Re: The Calling by PoeticXTC |
25-Dec-05/1:49 PM |
They saw his light.
That star; he smiles, heâs going home
Father calls
That star, he smiles, âIâm on my wayâ.
Happy Kwanza
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| Re: Never Let Go Again by TLRufener |
25-Dec-05/1:46 PM |
"When I see you next
I will take you into my arms
And never let go again" kidnap?
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