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you've returned i'm glad

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Apr 2007 · Edited 4 Apr 2007 · 4 comments

You’ve returned, I’m glad, I had been depressed but now I’m not. I have not had company like this since music. I could shout obscenities and probably will. I do not care that the last pine cone that I had saved to keep autumn alive had been pilfered from my room, it will return to the earth I do not care that my coat looks tatty, it feels warm. I no longer need to be delivered by the harlots of lost causes and because I am free they have won and so I. There is a fallen birch that has miraculously spanned a ravine. I could walk across it. I could dance across it with you your feet tip-tapping away. I do not worry that you will fall. I worry only to be without your distraction.

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[9] Dovina 4-Apr-07/10:34 AM Reply
Speak to that squirrel on your windowsill if you will, or go tip-tapping with me on that birch. I am most surprised, however, to see a gentleman in a tatty coat.
[9] Ranger 7-Apr-07/6:22 AM Reply
"because I am free they have won and so I"...? Am I being a dunce here?

Other than that, ace.
[7] Prince of Void 9-Apr-07/9:54 AM Reply
The poem’s been written by you
It is full of happiness in the sweet misery of past but the melody of music altered your life
As your life lingers on but you are still wondering about the season that enchanted you for years
Years had faced you harsh and now it’s time to let it go and think that the reasons of those happenings
Will be lost in the moment that you found something invaluable that he or she never understand...So if they fall...Nothing happen you no longer need his or her distraction.
[0] Dan garcia-Black 21-Aug-07/11:58 AM Reply
I can see this poem is not about the return of your mind.