| Re: The Calling by PoeticXTC |
25-Dec-05/1:49 PM |
They saw his light.
That star; he smiles, heâs going home
Father calls
That star, he smiles, âIâm on my wayâ.
Happy Kwanza
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| Re: why? by nentwined |
26-Dec-05/7:18 PM |
A good pimple but for a great pimple the end has to be about "Her."
How about?
"outweighed by You, you fat-assed, blood-sucking, faithless whore! But I will take you back,
if you ask." That's a pimple '10.'
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| Re: Hoi Polloi by INTRANSIT |
26-Dec-05/7:22 PM |
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| Re: Runaway by Cairsten |
29-Dec-05/10:13 AM |
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| Re: Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove |
23-May-06/10:44 AM |
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This poem is excellent but for one fact. The dead will have, on occasion, a bowel movement after bacteria and gas have their way with food left in stomach and intestines. So, one may shit and not be. Sorry.
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| Re: Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac |
11-Sep-06/9:36 AM |
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"old bottles that the river brung" and "all this from in the house, but it was not of us," sucked me under the house with the rest of the junk. You really are a poet, Damn You!
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| Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus! |
24-Oct-06/6:30 AM |
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This is a suicide note, right?
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11-Mar-07/11:03 AM |
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| Re: i feel so cold by minty871 |
11-Mar-07/11:07 AM |
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You might want to make a left on Valentine's day and find some body to keep you warm.
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| Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt |
11-Mar-07/11:14 AM |
I agree hole(as in cunt)-heartedly. Youse a dynamic IP. I get shocks from thos statics.
PS- Try nihsuuhS and comment sdrawkcab.
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| Re: Death Beseech You by polaroidmemory |
27-Mar-07/10:44 AM |
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21-Aug-07/11:52 AM |
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Why should you give a fuck about Hank? Or, for that matter, Ginsberg, Frost, Sandberg and Homer? They own the past. You should own the future.
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| Re: you've returned i'm glad by richa |
21-Aug-07/11:58 AM |
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I can see this poem is not about the return of your mind.
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| Re: On Youth Revisited by vulcan |
26-Apr-08/12:23 AM |
My new face is...younger than before...a chaos
Of Nightingales and flow'rs.
Yeah. Works for me.
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| Re: wam bam by malpaso |
26-Apr-08/12:29 AM |
Are you calling the USA a bottom?
Vaseline (another petroleum product)will break the condom. Better to use butt-er.
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| Re: look upon my works by nentwined |
26-Apr-08/12:33 AM |
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Quote the maven, "Nevermore!"
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| Re: People write funny things by Garrett S Sexton |
26-Apr-08/12:38 AM |
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Puddles of bloody poodles could be a follow-up.
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| Re: Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer |
31-May-08/2:44 PM |
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Are you fucking my wife? Of course not, it's just that the mood of this poem is familiar.
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| Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined |
30-Jun-08/8:31 AM |
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Even better on the 2nd read.
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26-Dec-08/10:43 PM |
Thanks for the read and the critique, In.
You are spot on!
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