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i feel so cold (Lyric) by minty871 I've walked this road once before
in the blistering cold
what's the month again?
What's the month again?
There's a cold day coming, once again
and i need to find a way to keep warm
could it be february, i feel the blistering cold
i'm sick of this weather make me feel so down
but i know the month will end
bring Rainbows in March
but i still walk the road, feel me feet so throbbing cold
when will it ever end?
Up the ladder:
Dreamtime
Down the ladder:
The Star Of The Bum
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Posted: March 11, 2007 5:53 AM PDT; Last modified: March 11, 2007 11:02 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9117 Comments:
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Dan garcia-Black @ 67.150.174.51
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11-Mar-07/11:07 AM
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You might want to make a left on Valentine's day and find some body to keep you warm.
Global warming
If you want to use street language, ok, but it's a bit off-putting as it comes only late in the poem. I bet this is a good song; like to hear it.
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