poemranker ::Love Lie's In Misery by Brandy_n_Cali

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Free verse № 111831

Love Lie's In Misery

Member since 2004 · Posted 7 Sep 2004 · 3 comments

Kissed by it's ruthless ways. Counting the month's then singling out the days. Forgive and forget, let's play the game. Confused by love, Who's the one to blame? Fearless tears that fall from their eyes. Pushed away, they begin to die. Caught up in misery, never thinking for the best. Disturbed by Love and forgetting the rest. You will never let love be the way it is. Let it go and be like this..... Silence is all around, your one true love never found. Hoping to find the one you have been looking for. But, through all the darkness you have searched each and every door. Further and further it will all fade away. Hold it all in and wait for your time, for your day.

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3 comments

[2] nentwined 7-Sep-04/8:19 PM Reply
please, please, please learn how to pluralize words and what apostrophes are for!

flow is awkward, concept overdone without anything to really sell it. why free verse with random line breaks when you go to such trouble to rhyme every "sentence"?
[6] Shardik 7-Sep-04/9:00 PM Reply
A pickle in a skirt.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-Sep-04/7:08 AM Reply
A notch below staggeringly cack.