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Love Lie's In Misery (Free verse) by Brandy_n_Cali

Kissed by it's ruthless ways. Counting the month's then singling out the days. Forgive and forget, let's play the game. Confused by love, Who's the one to blame? Fearless tears that fall from their eyes. Pushed away, they begin to die. Caught up in misery, never thinking for the best. Disturbed by Love and forgetting the rest. You will never let love be the way it is. Let it go and be like this.. ... Silence is all around, your one true love never found. Hoping to find the one you have been looking for. But, through all the darkness you have searched each and every door. Further and further it will all fade away. Hold it all in and wait for your time, for your day.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-Sep-04/7:08 AM
A notch below staggeringly cack.




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