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i feel so cold (Lyric) by minty871

I've walked this road once before in the blistering cold what's the month again? What's the month again? There's a cold day coming, once again and i need to find a way to keep warm could it be february, i feel the blistering cold i'm sick of this weather make me feel so down but i know the month will end bring Rainbows in March but i still walk the road, feel me feet so throbbing cold when will it ever end?

Dovina 12-Mar-07/6:15 PM
If you want to use street language, ok, but it's a bit off-putting as it comes only late in the poem. I bet this is a good song; like to hear it.




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