| Re: Sorry by shit |
29-Jul-04/12:32 PM |
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that was good ..descriping why you are sorry ..is good ..i like it
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| Re: The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0 |
29-Jul-04/1:24 PM |
Simplicity create its own beauty ..I am not sheakespeare but honestly
that is a nice sonnet ...u are talented with bright future ..
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| Re: today the world is beauty by nentwined |
29-Jul-04/1:34 PM |
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I understand what ur mood was ...we despair about our exsitence ..actully lost in the concept that is traceless without any clue ..at that moment the world is pretending of the beauty and glory has made us to think we are so weaker...then the whole world is
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| Re: Four and a half paragraphs of silence by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Jul-04/1:40 PM |
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that's really good ..i think some poets had already done that ..I am glad that u try to do sth different from the other .
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| Re: THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62 |
31-Jul-04/2:53 PM |
i understand ..so i like ur poem caus ei feel like the person who is in love ...try to keep the lover as close as possible ..that's was nice poem ..very good
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| Re: Saturn by Bachus |
31-Jul-04/3:01 PM |
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That was a nice poem ...i like it
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1-Aug-04/3:24 AM |
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that's nice poem....very good
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| Re: Untitled. by SupremeDreamer |
1-Aug-04/3:31 AM |
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a nice poem ..we shoud learn from that
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| Re: Meditations on a Human Skeleton in a Museum by Sasha |
1-Aug-04/3:23 PM |
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that's nice sonnet ..really
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| Re: The Chaos by Prince of Void |
1-Aug-04/3:31 PM |
better saying for that is this below
Despairing seed into this depth of earth that is the arm of chaos
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2-Aug-04/11:55 AM |
this is good ..i think u can do better then that ...
you are talented ...
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2-Aug-04/12:00 PM |
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this's nice poem ..will be
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| Re: Los Angeles by Dovina |
7-Aug-04/2:48 PM |
the nice poem ..i felt what u were going to say
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| Re: Natural Remedy by richa |
7-Aug-04/2:51 PM |
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sth made me think about this poem ..welldone
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| Re: A Letter to You by QuirkyWonder |
8-Aug-04/12:42 AM |
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The nice poem ...i like it
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| Re: soulless by ThePariahDog |
10-Aug-04/11:06 AM |
really nice a very good poem
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| Re: Waiting In The Shadows by TearsOnRoses |
10-Aug-04/11:32 PM |
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i love the title of ur poem ...i love the poem ...really a nice poem
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| Re: Falling Alone by FadedHappiness |
18-Aug-04/5:42 AM |
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very good ..that's a nice poem ..i like it
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| Re: The 80's by wilco |
18-Aug-04/5:46 AM |
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very good that's a nice poem...i like it
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| Re: Tonight At The Dead Man's Ball by dougsoderstrom |
21-Aug-04/5:53 PM |
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All the worldâs an illusion
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