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Four and a half paragraphs of silence (Free verse) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? '
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Up the ladder:
The Artist
Down the ladder:
Neil Simon is Living in My Lunula
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Posted: July 20, 2004 12:11 AM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2004 12:11 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.851648 Overall Rank: 1561 Comments:
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Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199
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20-Jul-04/1:41 AM
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This is very close to my poem "projective verse". However you have made it your own by excluding the word quim.
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?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.82.33
> Stephen Robins
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20-Jul-04/11:30 AM
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Yes. I was just pushing the genre to new bounds. Ideally, this poem should be read from a helicopter and radioed to the audience back on the ground.
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?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.82.33
> ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
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20-Jul-04/11:30 AM
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I forgot to add: you would have to be in a sound proof boothe inside the helicopter.
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159
> ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
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29-Jul-04/2:58 PM
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And preferably travelling away at a significant portion of the speed of light, so that there was a Doppler effect on the sound of the poem.
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that's really good ..i think some poets had already done that ..I am glad that u try to do sth different from the other .
Yours is the finest username on poemeranker. -?-
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