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Los Angeles (Haiku) by Dovina alone in the dark
lost at sea
confused in the city
Up the ladder:
a Waste of Space
Down the ladder:
a study in blossoms and beauty
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.090909
Posted: August 7, 2004 1:15 PM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2004 1:15 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.0454545 Overall Rank: 1219 Comments:
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Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.139
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7-Aug-04/2:48 PM
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the nice poem ..i felt what u were going to say
How is this haiku?
5-7-5 has become 5-3-5, and sobriety drunkenness. You should try it.
I prefer carrots to karats, morfs to forms and v8 to vodka (for now).
My middle brother lives in Los Angles, and I went to visit him. so I can relate to what you are saying -10-
does this follow the rules of haiku???
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