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Haiku № 110154

Los Angeles

by Dovina

Member since 2004 · Posted 7 Aug 2004 · 6 comments

alone in the dark lost at sea confused in the city

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6 comments

[7] Prince of Void 7-Aug-04/2:48 PM Reply
the nice poem ..i felt what u were going to say
[9] Dan garcia-Black 8-Aug-04/9:28 AM Reply
How is this haiku?
[n/a] Dovina › Dan garcia-Black 8-Aug-04/10:43 AM Reply
5-7-5 has become 5-3-5, and sobriety drunkenness. You should try it.
[9] Dan garcia-Black › Dovina 9-Aug-04/9:36 AM Reply
I prefer carrots to karats, morfs to forms and v8 to vodka (for now).
[10] blacksoul 12-Dec-04/3:46 AM Reply
My middle brother lives in Los Angles, and I went to visit him. so I can relate to what you are saying -10-
[4] jesslew 13-Mar-07/7:15 PM Reply
does this follow the rules of haiku???