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THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL (Free verse) by massangel62 peter, they say you are an angel
but I just don't understand
how could that possibly be
when you're not buried in the sand
your body is now ashes
you now don't have a grave
so I hold you in my hands
and I just cry out your name
I hope that you can hear me
I know your love was true
there's not a day in my life
that I don't think of you
why did you have to leave me
you said we would never part
the day that you died
is the day I lost my heart
so I will keep on waiting
till it's my turn to go
till we're together, forever
and you come and take me home.
Copyright ©2004 Michele J Post
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Posted: July 31, 2004 1:23 PM PDT; Last modified: July 31, 2004 1:23 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11617 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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patty t @ 24.156.158.81
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31-Jul-04/1:39 PM
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please peter-- take her back!
i understand ..so i like ur poem caus ei feel like the person who is in love ...try to keep the lover as close as possible ..that's was nice poem ..very good
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