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THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL (Free verse) by massangel62

peter, they say you are an angel but I just don't understand how could that possibly be when you're not buried in the sand your body is now ashes you now don't have a grave so I hold you in my hands and I just cry out your name I hope that you can hear me I know your love was true there's not a day in my life that I don't think of you why did you have to leave me you said we would never part the day that you died is the day I lost my heart so I will keep on waiting till it's my turn to go till we're together, forever and you come and take me home. Copyright ©2004 Michele J Post

Prince of Void 31-Jul-04/2:53 PM
i understand ..so i like ur poem caus ei feel like the person who is in love ...try to keep the lover as close as possible ..that's was nice poem ..very good




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