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Waiting In The Shadows (Other) by TearsOnRoses
The pain inside was so strong Nights and days, they seemed so long Without you here with me, Everything is so hard to see The nights are cold, the days are the same When I sleep, I call out your name Tomorrow seems so far away I can't wait, for you to say "I'm home again and I won't leave. Your pain is hard for me to concieve." And back to you, I will say, "Tomorrow is another day. When I awake, you'll be by my side." But for now, my tears I can't hide. I cry alone as I wait for you I feel so lonely, I feel so blue. I found your picture, all tattered and worn Why can't you see, that my heart is torn? I'm waiting in the shadows for a long lost love.

Up the ladder: "oh"
Down the ladder: Peppermint

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4582
Posted: August 10, 2004 11:15 PM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2004 11:15 PM PDT
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[10] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.188 | 10-Aug-04/11:32 PM | Reply
i love the title of ur poem ...i love the poem ...really a nice poem
[n/a] TearsOnRoses @ 66.73.129.129 > Prince of Void | 11-Aug-04/12:24 AM | Reply
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.135 | 12-Aug-04/10:17 AM | Reply
Four metric tons of guff, and a pinch of forlorn hope. Beautiful. Simply beautiful. -10-
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