Re: no title by Dovina	30-Sep-09/2:42 PM
Her words soared and fell down deep inside the blue surface, Then her dreams made it move, Along waves of lights and breeze To embrace The infinity of her beauty That made me a dream of meadows and cornfields in the canvas of her words I will wait under the shade of those words, Till I hear her enchanted voice Till I see her sun rise again Till I talk to her moon to bring her dreams back to my shore
Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina	11-Jan-09/2:37 PM
it's not about your poem it's about you though oh love... you have no kind of flaw or fault so then we begin to sing and make love everything that s excellent let our hearts just as pure and fair may beat in as one heart
Re: a comment on the invisible beauty by Prince of Void	11-Jan-09/2:31 PM
Oh love.. you have no kind of flaw or fault so then we begin to sing everything that s excellent let our hearts just as pure and fair may beat in as one heart Love Are you there ?
Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer	3-Jan-09/1:57 PM
to poets who has ignored the concept of beauty is something we define and re-define we just get things worse by ignoring the beauties that we are the fathers of ... we're here in the same wasteland of poetry
Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina	3-Jan-09/9:09 AM
The beauty of your poem is that it's beautifully simple and It's just great
Re: Over the Horizon by Miggy	5-Jun-08/1:40 PM
Over the horizon still some hopes will be found but at the end of the horizon will sink in darkness until dawn over the horizon slowly breaking into the far distance it finds the way to lit my heart again fill me light but soon the light's getting dark it starts all over again ..this is transient hope over the horizon ..I see things in my own poin of view ...urs are good too I like it ...thanx dude
Re: 5 Point Something on the Richter Scale by jessicazee	17-May-08/12:10 PM
that was a remarkable poem At once I read it it was gentle and plain unwavering under whose cautious hand against the the known intention in any hand it was full of feelings that flow from line to another to form the shape in the breast of the man
Re: If you are, I am by Deimos	25-Mar-08/12:25 PM
good poem ...keep writing down whatever you come cross the strange word
Re: plea bargain by malpaso	22-Mar-08/3:14 PM
I like it with all angles
Re: Voice of the World by Dovina	10-Jan-08/11:14 AM
How many hopeless people are suffering ? Within the voiceless world and who’s behind this show ? who’s that child ? demonstrating the deep sense of famine in the heart of the heartless world Who’s running this world ? Why some folks can’t raise their voice ? As well as it raise so may questions In their bare minds and also abomination Far from the great expecation of human kind Could we understand how they live ? In the context of despairs Or in the mataphore of the wasteland Where you are blamed To build their worlds upon the toxic wastland And you started to obsever What they react insead of the word “ living” All they’re reactions or expermints on them It has only one message after all The show must go on for your better life and world You cant help yourself watching the opera The opear of third world Childern’re playing in the dumping ground While you try to be more sympathetic Because that’s entertaining you It’s not the reality of your life dealing with it ..it’s the dumping world and a good senior of a opera while the future is still bleak for them day after day they face their fatal fate you still dump things and they die in the dumping grave
Re: # 2 by Lifeboatman	31-Dec-07/11:09 AM
every minutes u described it was very intersting to me I like it because of this lyric is more cinematic than the others
Re: Flickering Eyes by Jessina	27-Dec-07/8:46 AM
The dream that has changed world The dream had snowed my mind Where the shining was about to reflect beyond On the mount of where the divinity was born The infinity of love has fathomed all horizons The exitance was not contained of this world The world Where these two worlds’ve been lost It’s time my longing eyes are raining my heart And my lips are kissing my soul to fly away To where it belongs as it’s following the dove but my love is still trying to keep world away from wars making all decayding days from fears making that dream fade away in this human greed just ashes will remain nothing more than a fist can be gained once there was a heart now there is love last forever The love is giving the peace to those seekers of peace and love Mery christmas ...and thanx for ur comments and also ur beautiful poems has enchanted my mind and my heart
Re: Little Robin by Jessina	23-Dec-07/10:26 AM
A nice poem ...
Re: Day Dream by Jessina	7-Dec-07/11:34 PM
a nice poem ..
Re: a comment on Travails of one decade by Prince of Void	4-Dec-07/11:01 AM
you're right ...But I'm a director of cinema trying to show more and less telling a detailed story ..maybe it's not prefect well I'll do my best to make it best and thanx for commenting yours are better than mine ..but we both try to keep all values and concepts of our own way to explain the beauties ...I'm trying new things ...and well different ways of telling stories .. more new narrative structures will come soon
Re: Another Date by Dovina	8-Aug-07/12:16 PM
Well we are all dreamers Looking for what we dreamed yesterday But we don’t know We drag them all through tomorrows Where the reality seems too real The worst thing is we can't reach Those unreachable dreams Our passions never stop us That last in tears of our uncertainty Why we couldn’t...How it could happen The destiny became stranger than our lives We live with things unsaid and unsound Rising and falling down Here in our hearts The ocean has no depth No end ....no destination We are wandering along our dreams Our roads ...our days... But the point is you must devote yourself for someone or some reasons I know it's hard...or maybe impossible Devotions give your choices how you can change One day impossible is possible There are so many ways to go You can discover on your own Can I ask you? What are important things you like about a man?
Re: fear by BrendanElder	14-Jul-07/2:46 AM
I Love it it's a great poem
Re: Nothingness haunts ... by Prince of Void	14-Jul-07/2:42 AM
votes for despairs
Re: a comment on Dark void by Prince of Void	9-Jul-07/4:48 AM
living is the selfish act death opens no door the poor and the rich they are not the same our secerts last in the silnce our lies will kill us soon what we have done it was to dig a tunnel but at the end there is no light and life goes on however we figure out or not do u think i care ? do u think somebody will notice that ? no one notice that
Re: a comment on Dark void by Prince of Void	8-Jul-07/9:20 AM
His heart has been burnt Only ashes of it remained Heartlessly wandering around and around Thorough the dark void The lost love of a prince Who wants to feel his heart again? He put whys hows and Ives away He took the longest road and the mysterious one Where his legend will come to nowhere He will be placeless like those gods of myth He will be free of the destiny He can feel his heart again