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Little Robin (Other) by Jessina
Sultry morn of sunny March Sitting lazily on my couch Glinting rays began to flaunt Myriad hues on my window pane Rousing leisurely from my couch Opening slowly my windowpane Beam of Happiness flounced my mind Spotting the joy of this pleasant morn Swiftly I heard a delightful song Melody of enchanting pleasure Odd to my tranquil ears Feeling of getting a musical treasure A lovely little robin Singing happily on the cherry tree It’s outpouring melodious tune Altered my weary mood

Up the ladder: If you are, I am
Down the ladder: Green

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6152
Posted: December 23, 2007 9:45 AM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2007 9:45 AM PST
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[7] Prince of Void @ 77.237.66.60 | 23-Dec-07/10:26 AM | Reply
A nice poem ...
[n/a] Jessina @ 61.1.236.83 > Prince of Void | 23-Dec-07/8:14 PM | Reply
Thanks a lot for all your postive comments.Merry xmas to you.
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