Poemranker [Poem: Dark void] [by Prince of Void] Thu Nov 21 08:16:37 PST 2024

[5] Dovina @ 204.251.247.214 | 4-Jul-07/6:15 PM | Reply

Oh, thereâs a lost love in a dark void? Most intriguing.

[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.102 > Dovina | 8-Jul-07/9:19 AM | Reply

yes there is a lost love in a dark void

[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.102 > Dovina | 8-Jul-07/9:20 AM | Reply

His heart has been burnt
Only ashes of it remained
Heartlessly wandering around and around
Thorough the dark void
The lost love of a prince
Who wants to feel his heart again?
He put whys hows and Ives away
He took the longest road and the mysterious one
Where his legend will come to nowhere
He will be placeless like those gods of myth
He will be free of the destiny
He can feel his heart again

[5] Dovina @ 12.64.210.58 > Prince of Void | 8-Jul-07/10:06 AM | Reply

Must you gush forth with passionate sentiment like "He can feel his heart again"? Don't you know that all is vanity and hopeless, and all we can do is muddle through until we die?

[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.206 > Dovina | 9-Jul-07/4:48 AM | Reply

living is the selfish act
death opens no door
the poor and the rich
they are not the same
our secerts last in the silnce
our lies will kill us soon
what we have done
it was to dig a tunnel
but at the end there is no light
and life goes on
however we figure out or not
do u think i care ?
do u think somebody will notice that ?
no one notice that