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Dark void (Cinquain) by Prince of Void
Dark void Find the lost love Ocean and a dying fish Being the Breathless in dark void’s heart abyss

Up the ladder: humans
Down the ladder: Destruction

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9999
Posted: July 4, 2007 11:21 AM PDT; Last modified: July 4, 2007 11:21 AM PDT
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[5] Dovina @ 204.251.247.214 | 4-Jul-07/6:15 PM | Reply
Oh, there’s a lost love in a dark void? Most intriguing.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.102 > Dovina | 8-Jul-07/9:19 AM | Reply
yes there is a lost love in a dark void
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.102 > Dovina | 8-Jul-07/9:20 AM | Reply
His heart has been burnt
Only ashes of it remained
Heartlessly wandering around and around
Thorough the dark void
The lost love of a prince
Who wants to feel his heart again?
He put whys hows and Ives away
He took the longest road and the mysterious one
Where his legend will come to nowhere
He will be placeless like those gods of myth
He will be free of the destiny
He can feel his heart again
[5] Dovina @ 12.64.210.58 > Prince of Void | 8-Jul-07/10:06 AM | Reply
Must you gush forth with passionate sentiment like "He can feel his heart again"? Don't you know that all is vanity and hopeless, and all we can do is muddle through until we die?
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.206 > Dovina | 9-Jul-07/4:48 AM | Reply
living is the selfish act
death opens no door
the poor and the rich
they are not the same
our secerts last in the silnce
our lies will kill us soon
what we have done
it was to dig a tunnel
but at the end there is no light
and life goes on
however we figure out or not
do u think i care ?
do u think somebody will notice that ?
no one notice that
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